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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #240 on: March 10, 2017, 01:04:00 AM »
Still a rough draft, but made some updates to this:
http://www.dansdeals.com/archives/109004
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #241 on: March 10, 2017, 01:17:19 AM »
Still a rough draft, but made some updates to this:
http://www.dansdeals.com/archives/109004
I don't have the head to totally scrutinize it right now but isn't SQ getting rid of all fuel surcharges after 3/23? Also you may want to mention that the free stopover is only on a roundtrip award but on a one way saver award you can add stopover for $100 which is a pretty sweet deal that I feel many people might not know about. Also I would go into slightly more detail about the Marriott night plus flight option as its really better than SPG's.
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #242 on: March 10, 2017, 01:14:57 PM »
Took a few days, but fixed.


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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #243 on: March 10, 2017, 01:16:49 PM »
I don't have the head to totally scrutinize it right now but isn't SQ getting rid of all fuel surcharges after 3/23?
You also fell for Gary's clickbait title?
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #244 on: March 10, 2017, 01:17:52 PM »
You also fell for Gary's clickbait title?
Damn, I guess so
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #245 on: March 10, 2017, 01:20:03 PM »
The clickbait is strong in that blog.
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #246 on: March 10, 2017, 01:32:46 PM »
The clickbait is strong in that blog.
Unfortunately
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #247 on: March 12, 2017, 01:17:50 AM »
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #248 on: March 12, 2017, 01:23:54 AM »
Another rough draft:
http://www.dansdeals.com/archives/109136
"Yes, that means even if you donít use the certificate, you can still get 1.76 United miles per dollar for your Starpoints."
Shouldn't that be "per point"?
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #249 on: March 16, 2017, 01:55:24 PM »
Is the image broken for anyone else on this post?

http://www.dansdeals.com/archives/109521

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #250 on: March 16, 2017, 02:05:01 PM »
Is the image broken for anyone else on this post?

http://www.dansdeals.com/archives/109521
Don't see it either! Looks like he put the product link instead.
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #251 on: March 17, 2017, 11:54:08 AM »
Is the image broken for anyone else on this post?

http://www.dansdeals.com/archives/109521
broken for me as well.
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #252 on: March 19, 2017, 11:17:07 PM »
http://m.dansdeals.com/archives/109908
"With" have should read "Will" have

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #253 on: March 21, 2017, 05:54:25 PM »
Dan your recent post about the electronic ban, has a bunch of small spelling mistakes as double words, added letters stuck between the words amongst the post!
 But to top it all its a great post put together.
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #254 on: March 21, 2017, 06:06:09 PM »
That's what happens with on the road posts combined with jetlag.
More helpful to post a comment on what needs fixing though.
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