Not sure if all DDMS readers know what DDF stands for
Help Families Who Lost Loved Ones In Meron (DDF Matching Campaign)
Better?
Also, the paragraph on insurance detracts from the campaign, so maybe omit here. It is SO important that it could be the subject of a Commentary of its own, in a few weeks, when the immediate fundraising issues have passed and people can give it the attention it deserves.
Also, it's confusing when you copy the Shomati text, because it's not clear to the reader that you haven't written this. Can you summarize in a sentence or two what the Shomati/Yad Eliezer campaign is, and give a link to the reader to go there to read it? Or are most of your readers unable to follow links?