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Author Topic: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!  (Read 12944 times)

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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #60 on: February 28, 2019, 06:43:12 PM »
Ok guys! I think you're going to like this one! A fellow DDFer (who would like to remain anonymous) took the time to create a truly polished ad! Pls share your comments/critique. I think this is it!! @dan do we need your permission for using some of your wording in this??
Is this ad open for distribution (for me that would be to post on social media)?

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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #61 on: February 28, 2019, 06:46:21 PM »
Is this ad open for distribution (for me that would be to post on social media)?

@Dan do we need your permission for using some of your wording in this??

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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #62 on: February 28, 2019, 06:58:26 PM »
Is this ad open for distribution (for me that would be to post on social media)?
Still waiting on other's opinions... Can those in favor like or +1?
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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #63 on: February 28, 2019, 07:08:59 PM »
Like.

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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #64 on: February 28, 2019, 07:20:56 PM »
Ok guys! I think you're going to like this one! A fellow DDFer (who would like to remain anonymous) took the time to create a truly polished ad! Pls share your comments/critique. I think this is it!! @Dan do we need your permission for using some of your wording in this??
+1

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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #65 on: February 28, 2019, 07:21:49 PM »
Pretty decent considering the budget.

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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #66 on: February 28, 2019, 07:26:23 PM »
Ok guys! I think you're going to like this one! A fellow DDFer (who would like to remain anonymous) took the time to create a truly polished ad! Pls share your comments/critique. I think this is it!! @Dan do we need your permission for using some of your wording in this??
Hell of a lot better than the last one 👍
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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #67 on: February 28, 2019, 07:30:12 PM »
I like it a lot! The danger is expressed very well.

Some touch-up critique:

In the last paragraph:  connect sentence 2 and 3.  "youíll be left with the debt like lots of people who recently ,,,, "
And the last line:  Once youíve told them to stop charging your card, cancel that card so they canít charge you any more.

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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #68 on: February 28, 2019, 07:33:54 PM »
Hell of a lot better than the last one
I'm gonna try not to get offended... Professional Writing was never my thing! But I'm glad we all shared our comments and opinions and made real progress here!! Let's hope we see this in all papers next week!
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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #69 on: February 28, 2019, 07:47:06 PM »
I'm gonna try not to get offended... Professional Writing was never my thing! But I'm glad we all shared our comments and opinions and made real progress here!! Let's hope we see this in all papers next week!
it was ur initiative so u get the credit! Kal hakavod!!

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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #70 on: February 28, 2019, 07:59:02 PM »
Should it be more mentioned in the sub header that this ad is 'due to the recent stories in our community'?
The people that we are targeting didn't hear a lot about the ongoing stories, so it may grab their attention and talk more about it.
If it benefits even just one fellow DDFer, its worth posting it.

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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #71 on: February 28, 2019, 08:03:38 PM »
Should it be more mentioned in the sub header that this ad is 'due to the recent stories in our community'?

Had the same thought. Needs more of שלא תמות כדרך שמת פלוני.

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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #72 on: February 28, 2019, 08:08:33 PM »
Had the same thought. Needs more of שלא תמות כדרך שמת פלוני.
+1
Great add, but that needs to be added. It drives the point home.

Donít want to stir the pot here... (but we all know @aygart signature). I wonder if mayser can be used... this is for the sole cheesed of saving another yid from financial ruin.

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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #73 on: February 28, 2019, 08:28:32 PM »
I'm gonna try not to get offended... Professional Writing was never my thing! But I'm glad we all shared our comments and opinions and made real progress here!! Let's hope we see this in all papers next week!
Nah he was talking about mine ;)
Either way I think it would also be very good if you can attach the file for people to print and hang up in their shuls.
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Re: Ad Campaign for spreading awareness anti credit card swiping businesses!
« Reply #74 on: February 28, 2019, 08:44:22 PM »
I like it