She also wrote that men singing the song isn't the problem.
Picking a couple of points you disagree with /= dismissing the entire piece and especially rolling your eyes.
Yes, but all through the article she continues to say that this it is the problem.
For example
In the context of infertility, and a woman’s presumed yearning for children, she has no voice, no perspective. It is a MAN who sings what should be her line: “Will I ever be a mother?”
And her solution is for the man to steal the woman's words and make them his own by changing the "I" to "she"
I agree with her point that many in the frum world have gone too far in forbidding all pictures of women. However, it's clear that it's coming from "chumrah culture" (which expresses itself in every area of halacha) and not from the objectification of women expressed in the halftime show.