[Pledge To Match By 11:59am ET!] Tragedy in Miron: DDMS/DDF matching campaign

[Lurker]

I guess I'll leave the matching open for another hour.

Wait an hour to post, but leave the matching open indefinitely for now. When more is pledged here, you can update the post with, "Another $xxxx will be matched!" Serves as a nudge to get people to donate and keeps the campaign from getting stale after a couple of hours.

[TzviR]

Wordy.  Maybe

DDF Matching Campaign: Help Families Who Lost Loved Ones In Meron

Not sure if all DDMS readers know what DDF stands for

[etech0]

Not sure if all DDMS readers know what DDF stands for

+1 I would spell it out

[yuneeq]

Join DansDeals Members In Helping Families Who Lost Loved Ones In Meron

[YitzyS]

+1 I would spell it out

I would write "Dans Deals" instead of "DDF". Drop the word "Forums".

[flyingace]

Any quick thoughts on this before I post it?

https://www.dansdeals.com/advertisement/help-families-lost-loved-ones-meron-donation-matched-dansdeals-forums-member/

"shared the agony we felt" instead of "felt the agony we were in"?

[knowitall]

will match $360

[Yehuda57]

Can you make a suggestion? We need a headline that gets people to read the thread without getting "turned off" by thinking it's "just a regular fundraiser"

Join Dan and Help Families Who Lost Loved Ones In Meron - Your Donation Will Be Matched By A DansDeals Forum Member!

ETA: This is punchier.

Join DansDeals Members In Helping Families Who Lost Loved Ones In Meron

[lubaby]

I’ll match $360 as well.

[yeshivabucher]

ill do 100

[biobook]

Not sure if all DDMS readers know what DDF stands for

Help Families Who Lost Loved Ones In Meron (DDF Matching Campaign)

Better? 

Also, the paragraph on insurance detracts from the campaign, so maybe omit here.  It is SO important that it could be the subject of a Commentary of its own, in a few weeks, when the immediate fundraising issues have passed and people can give it the attention it deserves.

Also, it's confusing when you copy the Shomati text, because it's not clear to the reader that you haven't written this.  Can you summarize in a sentence or two what the Shomati/Yad Eliezer campaign is, and give a link to the reader to go there to read it?  Or are most of your readers unable to follow links?

[yeshivabucher]

Join Dan and Help Families Who Lost Loved Ones In Meron - Your Donation Will Be Matched By A DansDeals Forum Member!

maybe say not a sponsored post

[yuneeq]

Mention Yad Eliezer towards the beginning

Either - Donate To The Shomati Campaign by Yad Eliezer or Donate To The Yad Eliezer "Shomati" Campaign

[yeshivabucher]

anyone keeping a tally?

[jj1000]

Too many opinions on the title.

Leave it as is and it can always be shared a second or third time if it's doing well and switch up the wording each time.

[etech0]

DansDeals Forums Matching Campaign: Help Families Who Lost Loved Ones in Meron

[TzviR]

DansDeals Forums Matching Campaign: Help Families Who Lost Loved Ones in Meron

+1

[yelped]

What is this blurb about hearing a song in a cave? Is this guy trying to allude he heard a bas kol or something instead of just saying he heard some dude singing? Sounds weird to me. I would leave that out.

[dasmo801]

If I would like to donate $100, should it be done here on the matching side or as a straight donation on the main site? Or is there no difference? 

[th0306]

What happens if DDMS doesn't donate as much as the DDF matches? Who from DDF doesn't match?