I agree I got the message loud and clear.
Not to justify the letter, I kinda shot that email off in a desperate fashion, without much thought.
would this edited version be better?
Hi I am contacting you today about file number 000000. I just tried logging on to my hertz account and it was blocked out. Now I just spoke to someone at hertz department for do not rent list. I am appalled they would add me to this list the reason given was avis told them to add me. now with avis back in 2003 when I was 18 years old an agent got upset at me and claimed that I was not authorized to rent under a corporate account and this rental agent but me on the do not rent list at avis (and put in the system fraud or something) which is totally not true. they added me to there do not rent list for no good reason 10 years ago; I have been renting with hertz successively for the last 10 years without any issues only good experiences, about 3 weeks ago I reached out to avis to try to appeal there decision that was based on a disgruntled employee. Now it seems that hertz who I have never had any issues with added me to your list. I just spoke to the head of security at avis and he adamantly denies contacting hertz. Avis has no information or any proofs why I was added to their list. This seems like a huge mistake and misunderstanding. I am a legitimate individual, I own my own company, and I am prepared to send you copies of my license, passport, or any other form of identification to prove I am innocent. Please help me as soon as possible. Thank you for your time.
I can be reached at: 1111111111
Or via email: [edited]
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Hi,
I am contacting you today about file number 000000. I just tried logging on to my
Hertz account and it was blocked out.
Now I just spoke to someone at
the Hertz do not rent list department for . I am appalled
that they would add me to this list
. The reason given was
that Avis told them to add me.
Now
, with
Avis back in 2003 when I was 18 years old
, an agent got upset at me and claimed that I was not authorized to rent under a corporate account and this rental agent
put me on the do not rent list at
Avis (and put in the system
"fraud
" or something
) which is totally not true.
) They added me to th
eir do not rent list for no good reason 10 years ago, I have been renting with
Hertz success
fully for the last 10 years without any issues
- only good experiences
. About
three weeks ago I reached out to
Avis to try to appeal th
eir decision
which was based on a disgruntled employee. Now it seems that
Hertz
, with who
m I have never had any issues
, with added me to
their list. I just spoke to the head of security at
Avis and he adamantly denies contacting
Hertz. Avis has no information or any proof
s why I was added to their list. This seems like a huge mistake and misunderstanding. I am a legitimate individual, I own my own company, and I am prepared to send you copies of my license, passport, or any other form of identification to prove I am innocent. Please help me as soon as possible. Thank you for your time.
I can be reached at: 1111111111
Or via email: [edited]