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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #320 on: January 06, 2014, 08:03:37 PM »
This link isnt working on mobile.

Maybe because you are still using a Centro?  :P

Works fine on my Iphone.

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #321 on: January 06, 2014, 08:10:23 PM »
Almost 1,200 1 star reviews today 😝

Before

Although it's prob the most download app today...

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #322 on: January 06, 2014, 08:12:35 PM »
Although it's prob the most download app today...

lol not even close. There are apps that get 50,000+ downloads per day.

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #323 on: January 06, 2014, 08:55:43 PM »
The following is a statement from the Orthodox Union:
The New York Post headline Sunday following the gruesome murder of Menachem Stark, “Who didn’t want him dead?” is a violation of every rule of taste, decency and respect that even newspapers that depend on coverage that shocks and titillates must observe. Regarding respect, even if they had none for the victim, certainly they should have demonstrated some feeling for the deceased’s widow and seven children, who are now mourning his loss.

We do not accuse the Post of anti-Semitism. Its strong support of Israel over the years has been most welcome, when publications of a more genteel character have criticized the Jewish state on a regular basis. But the fact that the photo and headline will surely encourage others to be anti-Semitic, or to fuel their already existing anti-Semitism, makes it clear that the headline should simply have read, “Cops Investigate Brutal Murder of Father of Seven.”


I find it very heartening that the OU took its time and thought out its response, rather than impulsively jumping to call the NY Post anti-Semitic. Kudos to the OU for putting seychel first!

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #324 on: January 06, 2014, 09:00:43 PM »
The following is a statement from the Orthodox Union:
The New York Post headline Sunday following the gruesome murder of Menachem Stark, “Who didn’t want him dead?” is a violation of every rule of taste, decency and respect that even newspapers that depend on coverage that shocks and titillates must observe. Regarding respect, even if they had none for the victim, certainly they should have demonstrated some feeling for the deceased’s widow and seven children, who are now mourning his loss.

We do not accuse the Post of anti-Semitism. Its strong support of Israel over the years has been most welcome, when publications of a more genteel character have criticized the Jewish state on a regular basis. But the fact that the photo and headline will surely encourage others to be anti-Semitic, or to fuel their already existing anti-Semitism, makes it clear that the headline should simply have read, “Cops Investigate Brutal Murder of Father of Seven.”


I find it very heartening that the OU took its time and thought out its response, rather than impulsively jumping to call the NY Post anti-Semitic. Kudos to the OU for putting seychel first!

And I like it because it's the first statement that is written well

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #325 on: January 06, 2014, 09:41:08 PM »
Maybe because you are still using a Centro?  :P

Works fine on my Iphone.
I didn't try it, my brother tried it on his S3.

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #326 on: January 06, 2014, 09:46:14 PM »
The following is a statement from the Orthodox Union:
The New York Post headline Sunday following the gruesome murder of Menachem Stark, “Who didn’t want him dead?” is a violation of every rule of taste, decency and respect that even newspapers that depend on coverage that shocks and titillates must observe. Regarding respect, even if they had none for the victim, certainly they should have demonstrated some feeling for the deceased’s widow and seven children, who are now mourning his loss.

We do not accuse the Post of anti-Semitism. Its strong support of Israel over the years has been most welcome, when publications of a more genteel character have criticized the Jewish state on a regular basis. But the fact that the photo and headline will surely encourage others to be anti-Semitic, or to fuel their already existing anti-Semitism, makes it clear that the headline should simply have read, “Cops Investigate Brutal Murder of Father of Seven.”


I find it very heartening that the OU took its time and thought out its response, rather than impulsively jumping to call the NY Post anti-Semitic. Kudos to the OU for putting seychel first!
Something is wrong with the sentence structure imho.

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #327 on: January 06, 2014, 09:48:06 PM »
Something is wrong with the sentence structure imho.

#notwrittenwell


What's wrong with that sentence?

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #328 on: January 06, 2014, 09:53:39 PM »
over 2600 onestar reviews

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #329 on: January 06, 2014, 09:58:11 PM »
Does anyone have any updates?

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #330 on: January 06, 2014, 10:35:08 PM »
What's wrong with that sentence?
First of, its 'while' not 'when'.
Even if fixed it could still be structured better

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #331 on: January 06, 2014, 11:26:56 PM »

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #332 on: January 06, 2014, 11:27:36 PM »
First of, its 'while' not 'when'.
Even if fixed it could still be structured better
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"When" is perfectly fine. You may have chosen to write "while" instead, but that'd be a matter of style.  There is nothing wrong with "when" in that sentence.

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #333 on: January 06, 2014, 11:37:49 PM »
http://www.vosizneias.com/151288/2014/01/03/brooklyn-ny-businessman-abducted-from-his-williamsburg-office/

Please pray for מנחם משולם בן שאניא עטי'ה

See these articles:

http://www.yelp.com/biz/southside-associates-llc-brooklyn?nb=1

http://therealdeal.com/blog/2011/07/12/israel-perlmuter-known-as-sam-perl-and-menachem-stark-face-51m-in-property-suits-over-williamsburg-and-greenpoint-developments/

By posting those articles you are implying that there is good reason for this tragedy.
Just so happens to be that most rental complexes have terrible reviews just because most people are complainers especially lower class rental complexes.

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #334 on: January 06, 2014, 11:42:28 PM »
By posting those articles you are implying that there is good reason for this tragedy.


Give him a break. He wrote it before anyone knew how this would end.

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #335 on: January 06, 2014, 11:43:13 PM »
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"When" is perfectly fine. You may have chosen to write "while" instead, but that'd be a matter of style.  There is nothing wrong with "when" in that sentence.
When is for a point in time, while is for a duration.
Its wrong.

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #336 on: January 06, 2014, 11:54:19 PM »
When is for a point in time, while is for a duration.
Its wrong.
B.S.

"Hey, Josh, ya 'member the good old days when you and I would hang out all the time?"
"Hey, Josh, ya 'member the good old days while you and I would hang out all the time?"

You are welcome to continue to argue, but don't make up rules.

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #337 on: January 06, 2014, 11:54:35 PM »
When is for a point in time, while is for a duration.
Its wrong.

You're telling him about the difference between when and while, while you just wrote "Its wrong"? Man!

BTW why are we bickering about grammar on a thread about a shocking, sickening tragedy?

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #338 on: January 07, 2014, 12:00:02 AM »
You're telling him about the difference between when and while, while you just wrote "Its wrong"? Man!

BTW why are we bickering about grammar on a thread about a shocking, sickening tragedy?
Good point.
I'll disengage now.
Thanks for pointing that out.

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Re: B"DE Menachem Shtark
« Reply #339 on: January 07, 2014, 12:33:07 AM »
B.S.

"Hey, Josh, ya 'member the good old days when you and I would hang out all the time?"
"Hey, Josh, ya 'member the good old days while you and I would hang out all the time?"

You are welcome to continue to argue, but don't make up rules.
you're misunderstanding. The good old days is "back in the day" -a point in time. When two things happened over time, simultaneously its while.

See link if you want to perfect your English.

http://www.perfectyourenglish.com/usage/as-when-while.htm
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