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Design Comments & Critique
« on: April 02, 2014, 02:47:26 PM »
Gents, I had a moment of inspiration this morning and decided to come up with a new design concept for shabbat.com. It took me 1:15 hours to design it from scratch so if the general oilem does not like it i can always try again.

Please note that this is pro bono work - which means you can't just go and critique without providing detail....




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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #1 on: April 02, 2014, 02:52:49 PM »
Your site or just a favor?
If you don't care why would you comment?
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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #2 on: April 02, 2014, 03:09:23 PM »
Nice layout. I like the "Stats" box on the right. It gives a general idea of the member population.

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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #3 on: April 02, 2014, 03:10:19 PM »
Your site or just a favor?

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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #4 on: April 02, 2014, 04:15:14 PM »
Your site or just a favor?
I'm just the designer (plus a few more hats I wear for them)

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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #5 on: April 02, 2014, 04:30:10 PM »
I love it

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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #6 on: April 02, 2014, 05:50:45 PM »
It looks really nice.

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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #7 on: May 06, 2014, 03:39:56 PM »
Didn't know if i should start a new thread
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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #8 on: May 06, 2014, 03:50:52 PM »
Didn't know if i should start a new thread
Higher resolution would help.

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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #9 on: May 08, 2014, 02:37:31 PM »
Higher resolution would help.
Cannot exceed max file size......
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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #10 on: May 08, 2014, 02:46:40 PM »
Cannot exceed max file size......

So upload to an image sharing site and embed here.

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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #11 on: May 08, 2014, 03:01:42 PM »
So upload to an image sharing site and embed here.
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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #12 on: May 08, 2014, 03:24:00 PM »
"jewish" near the bottom should be capitalized. Otherwise, looks good to me, but I'm not generally picky. :)

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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #13 on: May 13, 2014, 04:57:06 PM »


I find the mint green to be too pastel toned for the bright logo
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Re: Design Comments & Critique
« Reply #14 on: May 14, 2014, 06:30:10 AM »
I find the mint green to be too pastel toned for the bright logo
Thanks
Would you suggest changing the logo or the site color?
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