For the full treatment, I take 100 shekel an hour, but here's a few basic corrections (bear in mind I can't see the social media links):
Maybe all the hateful comments are mostly from Russian troll farms,
Use 'all' OR 'mostly' but not both. Pashtus 'mostly' is better in this context, so drop 'all'.
While the Nazis tried to erase and hide their atrocities, Hamas used body cameras gleefully documenting their crimes against humanity to score propaganda points. It’s a level of evil that the world had never seen before.
I would write 'Hamas
gleefully used body cameras
to document their crimes against humanity
and score...'
Either 'It was a level... that the world had never seen...' or 'It's (or It is) a level... that the world never saw...'
There were calls for a ceasefire even before Israel responded. That ignored the reality that there already had been a ceasefire on 10/6.
Surely there must be some voices that realize the hard damage that Hamas is inflicting on their cause?
Indeed, the speeches seem to become more tempered with each passing day, as the 10/7 attacks fade into memory.
Watered down, I would say.
We’re lucky that the President is as supportive as he is given that staff.
This needs to be spelled out better. Maybe 'despite his staff.'
I'm still reading.
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