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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1140 on: May 09, 2024, 10:48:09 AM »
Sharing soon if anyone has any quick edits
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1142 on: August 11, 2024, 10:13:17 PM »

Very well done! This deserves a boatload of attention

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1143 on: August 11, 2024, 10:13:47 PM »

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1144 on: August 11, 2024, 10:14:12 PM »

You should crop his screenshots, removing the bookmark bar. Doubt he wants everyone to see that.

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1145 on: August 11, 2024, 10:15:19 PM »
Antisemitism.  One word, no hyphen

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1146 on: August 11, 2024, 10:16:33 PM »
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1147 on: August 11, 2024, 10:19:11 PM »
Though it’s impossible to rule out that anti-Semitism didn’t play a role as well.

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Impossible to rule out antisemitism playing a role as well


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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1149 on: August 11, 2024, 10:23:57 PM »
My personal opinion, but I’d crop the screenshots of his Chase account and emails. I’d crop out the top of his browser and his bottom toolbar in the first one, as there’s no need to show the world his bookmarks and open tabs, and I’d crop all that and the left sidebar on the Yahoo screenshot, which shows unread emails, his various addresses, etc. No need for any of that, and people may make all sorts of judgements based on other things on all of those parts of the screen.

I don’t think any of that is relevant to the story at hand.

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1150 on: August 11, 2024, 10:40:11 PM »


No evidence (emails I guess) that they claimed the crew would not be willing to serve the kosher passengers? That was the key allegation.

I appreciate that he defends himself quite well, but if he made up the antisemitic stuff, that's a pretty bad look...

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1151 on: August 11, 2024, 10:45:54 PM »
No evidence (emails I guess) that they claimed the crew would not be willing to serve the kosher passengers? That was the key allegation.

I appreciate that he defends himself quite well, but if he made up the antisemitic stuff, that's a pretty bad look...
He didn't claim that to me.
He said they said they would do kosher on their terms, not on his terms. No mashgiach access, etc.

I asked for more emails of that back and forth, but didn't get any. Should I point that out?
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1152 on: August 11, 2024, 10:47:22 PM »
He didn't claim that to me.
He said they said they would do kosher on their terms, not on his terms. No mashgiach access, etc.

I asked for more emails of that back and forth, but didn't get any. Should I point that out?
Did the Queens Jewish Link make it up, or did he claim that to them and now is walking it back?

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1153 on: August 11, 2024, 10:50:31 PM »
He didn't claim that to me.
He said they said they would do kosher on their terms, not on his terms. No mashgiach access, etc.

I asked for more emails of that back and forth, but didn't get any. Should I point that out?
Your article leaves the impression that "on their terms" is like a details thing, not a fundamental change in the agreement.

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1154 on: August 11, 2024, 10:56:17 PM »
Did the Queens Jewish Link make it up, or did he claim that to them and now is walking it back?
Which quote are you referring to?
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1155 on: August 11, 2024, 10:57:26 PM »
Your article leaves the impression that "on their terms" is like a details thing, not a fundamental change in the agreement.
Added more detail.
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1156 on: August 11, 2024, 10:58:50 PM »
Which quote are you referring to?
"They were wrong. Days before the voyage was to begin, tour operator Yossi Zablocki received a curt message: The ship’s crew refuses to cooperate with the provision of kosher food for the Jewish passengers at any point in the trip. Nothing a frantic Zablocki could suggest would alter their stance. “We simply will not do this,” he was told."


And

"Not only would the crew refuse to dedicate any kosher sections of the kitchen, it said, but they also insisted that no kosher utensils or food with a kosher certification will be available on the ship. “The use of kosher china, pots, frying pans, etc. will not be allowed.” Anything kosher was in effect to be treated as forbidden on the ship. And no rabbi shall enter. "



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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1157 on: August 11, 2024, 11:19:43 PM »
"They were wrong. Days before the voyage was to begin, tour operator Yossi Zablocki received a curt message: The ship’s crew refuses to cooperate with the provision of kosher food for the Jewish passengers at any point in the trip. Nothing a frantic Zablocki could suggest would alter their stance. “We simply will not do this,” he was told."


And

"Not only would the crew refuse to dedicate any kosher sections of the kitchen, it said, but they also insisted that no kosher utensils or food with a kosher certification will be available on the ship. “The use of kosher china, pots, frying pans, etc. will not be allowed.” Anything kosher was in effect to be treated as forbidden on the ship. And no rabbi shall enter. "
I wrote that they wouldn't allow his kosher standards onboard. I asked for the quotes and didn't get it as of yet, so I didn't put it in.

Those paragraphs are not very well written, but I don't think those paragraphs imply they wouldn't serve kosher passengers?

But the gist of how I understood it is here:
https://www.dansdeals.com/points-travel/curious-case-costa-cruises-kosher-group/#Kosher_problems_arise


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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1158 on: August 12, 2024, 12:24:03 AM »
I wrote that they wouldn't allow his kosher standards onboard. I asked for the quotes and didn't get it as of yet, so I didn't put it in.

Those paragraphs are not very well written, but I don't think those paragraphs imply they wouldn't serve kosher passengers?

But the gist of how I understood it is here:
https://www.dansdeals.com/points-travel/curious-case-costa-cruises-kosher-group/#Kosher_problems_arise

Right. I'm with you, but the QJL piece is definitely saying it was antisemitism. My question is whether they made that up themselves based on the same story you got from תרל"א Destinations, or whether Yossi told them that story.

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1159 on: August 12, 2024, 12:25:57 AM »
Right. I'm with you, but the QJL piece is definitely saying it was antisemitism. My question is whether they made that up themselves based on the same story you got from תרל"א Destinations, or whether Yossi told them that story.
We had another conversation just now and Yossi clearly thinks its antisemitism. I've updated the DDMS draft post to better reflect that.
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