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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #880 on: November 18, 2020, 04:14:13 AM »
"to sell tens of billions of dollars in miles"
to sell tens of billions of dollars worth of miles

"where the banks get consumers to use their credit cards"
where the banks gain from a consumers using their credit cards

"to stay afloat by mortgaging"
to stay afloat during covid-19/financial crisises by mortgaging

"dollars in low interest loans"
dollars for low interest loans?

"Their convoluted Matmid mileage program doesnít use miles like just about"
I had to do a double take on the "like just about ". Replace "just about" with "practically" every other?

"regardless of activity and awards"
regardless of activity, and awards

"redeem for flights to anywhere that doesnít begin or end in Israel"
redeem for flight routes that don't begin or end in Israel

Honestly, the math in why the program is bad is too much for me. I will just look of the bottom line of how much I'm earning from my dollar with the card, where I can do better, and why I may still be interested in the card.
Meaning to say that the math should be there, but parenthetical.
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #881 on: November 18, 2020, 04:23:07 AM »
Can you post what type of feedback you want?
I often pick at sentence structure and commas, and I don't think that's what you necessarily want.
that's most of what I do .

Please let us know if that's what you want.
120 characters? Hmm, I wonder what I could write with 64 characters. Boy, it's gonna be hard to use up 15 characters. W-

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #882 on: November 18, 2020, 12:27:43 PM »
Please let us know if that's what you want.
Sure. It doesn't need to be thesis level, but if it helps readability that's great.
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #884 on: November 18, 2020, 12:52:09 PM »
Made some post updates
A lot better!

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #887 on: December 13, 2020, 09:22:01 PM »

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #888 on: December 13, 2020, 09:23:34 PM »
RE: google deleting info
From the email it sounds like whichever service you didn't log into they will wipe, even if the account was logged into?
Guys, after publishing you can comment on the post itself.
This thread is just for in advance :)

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #890 on: December 29, 2020, 01:37:24 AM »
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Still, if youíre looking to have a hotel everywhere you do

Should say "go"
120 characters? Hmm, I wonder what I could write with 64 characters. Boy, it's gonna be hard to use up 15 characters. W-

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #891 on: December 29, 2020, 01:39:28 AM »
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making them by the far the most valuable hotel points.

Extra word "the"
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #892 on: December 29, 2020, 01:44:51 AM »
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Youíll need 30K points for category 7 hotel

Needs either an "a" or "hotels"
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #893 on: December 29, 2020, 01:47:44 AM »
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and will even buy you 3 kosher meals a day from the local Chabad House!

Maybe hyperlink to the chabad house website
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #894 on: December 29, 2020, 01:55:56 AM »
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Globalists can also book a gust of honor award to gift Globalist status to another person for a say when using the Globalist memberís points.

Not sure what you were trying to say here
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #895 on: December 29, 2020, 01:59:19 AM »
All updated, thanks!
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #896 on: December 29, 2020, 02:06:32 AM »
120 characters? Hmm, I wonder what I could write with 64 characters. Boy, it's gonna be hard to use up 15 characters. W-

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #897 on: December 29, 2020, 02:08:37 AM »
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meaning you need 18 more lite qualifying nights for Globalist.

Should say "elite" instead of "lite"
120 characters? Hmm, I wonder what I could write with 64 characters. Boy, it's gonna be hard to use up 15 characters. W-

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #898 on: December 29, 2020, 02:11:20 AM »
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You would also get a free category 1-4 anniversary night on the card and a free category 1-4 anniversary night for hitting 30 elite qualifying nights in a year

Is the second night also anniversary?
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #899 on: December 29, 2020, 02:15:58 AM »
Option 2 and Option 3 it says
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You would also get 3rd free category 1-4 night...

Should say "You would also get a 3rd free category 1-4 night..."
120 characters? Hmm, I wonder what I could write with 64 characters. Boy, it's gonna be hard to use up 15 characters. W-