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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #900 on: December 29, 2020, 02:18:05 AM »
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If are a new cardholder
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If are an existing cardholder

Both missing the word "you"
120 characters? Hmm, I wonder what I could write with 64 characters. Boy, it's gonna be hard to use up 15 characters. W-

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #901 on: December 29, 2020, 02:21:32 AM »
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If you spend 13 nights in a hotel with a .checkout date of 1/1-2/28 you would get 16 elite qualifying nights,

Should say 26 instead of 16 and there's an extra period in the sentence.
120 characters? Hmm, I wonder what I could write with 64 characters. Boy, it's gonna be hard to use up 15 characters. W-

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #902 on: December 29, 2020, 02:22:58 AM »
Is the second night also anniversary?
Option 2 and Option 3 it says
Should say "You would also get a 3rd free category 1-4 night..."
Same for Existing Cardholder section
120 characters? Hmm, I wonder what I could write with 64 characters. Boy, it's gonna be hard to use up 15 characters. W-

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #903 on: December 29, 2020, 02:28:51 AM »
Wow, Dan you did it again. An incredible article.
120 characters? Hmm, I wonder what I could write with 64 characters. Boy, it's gonna be hard to use up 15 characters. W-

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #904 on: December 29, 2020, 05:38:31 AM »
« Last Edit: December 29, 2020, 05:44:25 AM by mochjas »

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #906 on: December 29, 2020, 08:07:52 AM »
Important to note that a lot of Chase> Hyatt transfers take 2 days, and they state it can take up to 7.
Always praying for delayed baggage.

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #907 on: December 29, 2020, 10:26:48 AM »
Important to note that a lot of Chase> Hyatt transfers take 2 days, and they state it can take up to 7.
Is that new? Was instant for me in the past.
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #908 on: December 29, 2020, 10:27:01 AM »
Wow, Dan you did it again. An incredible article.
Thanks for the edits!!!
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #909 on: December 29, 2020, 11:20:11 AM »
Is that new? Was instant for me in the past.
Was for me as well, but recently had a few friends that said it took a few days and when I tried last [1 week ago] a larger amount, it took 2 days.

I called Hyatt and they said its not on their side but also said it can take 7 days.. , Chase shows as processing.

It's possible it has to do with new accounts or large amounts, but multiple reports of waiting  longer then instant justifies the removel of the the "instant" label.
Always praying for delayed baggage.

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #910 on: December 29, 2020, 12:05:36 PM »
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Title should read
“ECCO Men’s Holton Apron Toe Tie Shoes For $50.61 And More Ecco Dress Shoes For SomethingFishy From Just $31.41 From Amazon!” :)

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #911 on: December 29, 2020, 12:43:50 PM »
120 characters? Hmm, I wonder what I could write with 64 characters. Boy, it's gonna be hard to use up 15 characters. W-

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #913 on: January 03, 2021, 07:41:04 PM »
Great job!

I'd put a comma before the "as" in this sentence: "The director of pneumonia at the Gates Foundation wants to see the second vaccine dose delayed as the benefit of the first dose is much higher than the second dose:"

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #914 on: January 03, 2021, 07:50:51 PM »
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Has The LAX Jetpack Flyer Been Caught On Tape?
Several pilots have reported seeing “a guy in a jatpack” flying around LAX airspace:
jetpack not jatpack
Small people talk about other people.
Average people talk about things
BIG PEOPLE TALK ABOUT IDEAS.

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #915 on: January 03, 2021, 07:52:15 PM »
Great job!

I'd put a comma before the "as" in this sentence: "The director of pneumonia at the Gates Foundation wants to see the second vaccine dose delayed as the benefit of the first dose is much higher than the second dose:"
and also say "than of the second dose"
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #916 on: January 03, 2021, 09:15:30 PM »
The store sued her after watched surveillance video.
"watching" of "they watched"

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #917 on: January 03, 2021, 09:18:11 PM »
It’d hard to imagine being in such a situation.
it'd "be" hard

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #918 on: January 07, 2021, 03:25:31 PM »

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #919 on: February 25, 2021, 09:19:12 AM »
https://www.dansdeals.com/points-travel/airlines/delta/targeted-level-competing-elite-status-delta/

Headline reads "Level Up Your Competing Elite Status With Delta!"

It should read "Level Up Your Competing Elite Status With Delta if you still want it"