However they also serve as an amazing memory book of a trip.
Needs a comma
However, they also serve as an amazing memory book of a trip.
Maybe hyperlink the ohel so people know what you are referring to.
israshot recognized me when I visited the Ohel before Rosh Hashana and came over to say hello, which is when I asked him to finish his trip report so I could feature it in a roundup!
A bit of a run on sentence.
israshot recognized me when I visited the Ohel before Rosh Hashana and came over to say hello. I then asked him to finish his trip report so I could feature it in a roundup!
Then again as time goes on, the better we get at treating COVID-19 and the closer we get to a vaccine.
Make more readable:
Then again, as time goes on we get better at treating COVID-19 closer to a vaccine.
should he win reelection.
Isn't it re-election?