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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1060 on: August 08, 2022, 02:56:34 PM »


Maybe its just me I find this layout for a response to the above confusing
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1061 on: August 08, 2022, 03:03:08 PM »
"when the passenger(s) is downgraded to a lower class of service"

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1062 on: August 08, 2022, 03:10:09 PM »


Maybe its just me I find this layout for a response to the above confusing
How about now?

"when the passenger(s) is downgraded to a lower class of service"
Thanks
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1063 on: August 08, 2022, 03:16:54 PM »
Money talks...mine says goodbye!

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1064 on: August 08, 2022, 03:20:58 PM »
Perhaps instead of "takeaway" you can put "Dan's Take" or "My Take", along with a thumbs up or thumbs down symbol for each point.

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1068 on: December 04, 2022, 02:53:35 PM »
Missing US altitude reserve card. literally a $50 dollar card after travel credit
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1069 on: December 04, 2022, 04:59:21 PM »
Missing US altitude reserve card. literally a $50 dollar card after travel credit

How do you get to $50?

AF $400, Travel Credit $325.
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1070 on: December 04, 2022, 07:14:29 PM »
How do you get to $50?

AF $400, Travel Credit $325.
you’re correct $75

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1071 on: December 04, 2022, 07:33:48 PM »
And only 4 lounge visits.
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1072 on: December 04, 2022, 07:43:33 PM »
Here's my thoughts: I would love if the post had a short synopsis or "Dan's Recommendation". Something that takes all the info and distills it for someone like me, who is not a major credit card guru and won't be able to follow the entire post.

Something like: "Dans Take: If you are a heavy traveler who want's the greatest access, go with the xxxxxx or the xxxxxx. But if you only travel from time to time and would like the perks when they are available, xxxxxxx or xxxxxxx would be a great choice to consider, especially with their sweet transfer policy for xxxxxxxx."

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1073 on: December 05, 2022, 12:16:05 AM »
Maybe simplify the title to something like:
Which credit card to get for lounge access

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1074 on: December 05, 2022, 12:21:10 AM »
Or better yet.

Accessing Airport Lounges; What credit card gets you in.

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1075 on: December 06, 2022, 09:08:20 PM »
Here's my thoughts: I would love if the post had a short synopsis or "Dan's Recommendation". Something that takes all the info and distills it for someone like me, who is not a major credit card guru and won't be able to follow the entire post.

Something like: "Dans Take: If you are a heavy traveler who want's the greatest access, go with the xxxxxx or the xxxxxx. But if you only travel from time to time and would like the perks when they are available, xxxxxxx or xxxxxxx would be a great choice to consider, especially with their sweet transfer policy for xxxxxxxx."
Great post, and thanks for adding the summery!

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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1078 on: December 14, 2022, 08:13:22 PM »
Too dense for the proofreaders ;D

I would point out where one sees the Saver icon. Took me a while to find it (on mobile).
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Re: Proofread DDMS Posts In Advance...
« Reply #1079 on: January 22, 2023, 07:56:55 PM »
https://www.dansdeals.com/more/dans-commentary/personal-messages/harmed-people-thoughts-shared-shul-boruch-taub-ben-chafetz/

I think you should change:

"Over the past few days I attended the funerals of 40 year old Boruch Taub Z”L and 45 year old Ben Chafetz Z”L, along with countless other members of the community."

To:

"Over the past few days, I having joined countless other members of the community in attending the funerals of 40 year old Boruch Taub Z”L and 45 year old Ben Chafetz Z”L"