Has This Ever Happened To You With IBeria Airlines-Minors Bumped?

[mmgfarb]

I would add "When asked," to the beginning of this sentence.

Iberia in Tel Aviv said they were not able to handle any compensation issues.

[Mordyk]

The whole article looks great and to the point. Now let the mews outlets catch on to this...

[etech0]

Great article so far!

A few grammar tidbits:

Is there a worse nightmare than having 3 of your kids.....

I would write 'Could there be a worse nightmare'

so they flew on British Airways via London on the outbound journey and on Iberia via Madrid on the return.

I would write 'so they flew British Airways with a stopover in London, and returned with Iberia Airlines with a stop in Madrid.'

Their grandfather accompanied them to the Iberia check-in counter in Miami

-> 'In Miami, their grandfather.......'

but despite asking for the Iberia boarding passes

-> '. When they asked for the Iberia boarding passes.....'

Iberia stranded 3 kids in a city where they didn’t speak the language without taking any sort of responsibility for their well-being.

I would put a comma before 'language'

[Dan]

Great article so far!

A few grammar tidbits:
I would write 'Could there be a worse nightmare'
I would write 'so they flew British Airways with a stopover in London, and returned with Iberia Airlines with a stop in Madrid.'
 -> 'In Miami, their grandfather.......'
 -> '. When they asked for the Iberia boarding passes.....'
I would put a comma before 'language'

Thanks, assuming your mean after language?

Thoughts on

The Kids In Spain Are Forced Off The Plane: A Nightmare With Iberia
Vs.
Nightmare On Iberia: The Kids In Spain Are Forced Off The Plane

[henche]

Thanks, assuming your mean after language?

Thoughts on

The Kids In Spain Are Forced Off The Plane: A Nightmare With Iberia
Vs.
Nightmare On Iberia: The Kids In Spain Are Forced Off The Plane

First

[Dan]

V4:
https://www.dansdeals.com/points-travel/airlines/airline-news/iberia-forces-3-kids-flying-alone-miami-tel-aviv-off-plane-spain/

[jj1000]

Do the people not liking the "The" know what expression is being parodied?

What's the the parody?

@Yehuda57

[ilherman]

A whole lot of people I offer Iberia options never heard that name before. If possible to add in title Iberia airlines so people know we're talking about an airline..

[SearchGuy]

V4:
https://www.dansdeals.com/points-travel/airlines/airline-news/iberia-forces-3-kids-flying-alone-miami-tel-aviv-off-plane-spain/

Fix the link to match the title

[Dan]

Fix the link to match the title

That's the plan.

[SearchGuy]

That's the plan.

Looks a great article

[whYME]

Do the people not liking the "The" know what expression is being parodied?

The first time I read it I didn't chap the parody and it seemed pretty tortured.

[Dan]

https://www.dansdeals.com/points-travel/airlines/airline-news/kids-spain-forced-off-plane-nightmare-iberia/

[Yehuda57]

What's the the parody?

@Yehuda57

https://www.google.com/search?q=the+rain+in+spain+falls+mainly+on+the+plain

[LeeAddi]

https://www.dansdeals.com/points-travel/airlines/airline-news/kids-spain-forced-off-plane-nightmare-iberia/

I do agree with the suggestion of writing in the title "Iberia Airlines" as opposed to just 'Iberia'

[mmgfarb]

I would just drop the clever title, it takes away from the seriousness IMO

[Dan]

https://www.google.com/search?q=the+rain+in+spain+falls+mainly+on+the+plain

My guess is that 95% of readers won't know that..

[Dan]

I would just drop the clever title, it takes away from the seriousness IMO

Folks, if you don't like the title then post one you do like.

[Dan]

The first time I read it I didn't chap the parody and it seemed pretty tortured.

AKA, probably too tortured for most people.

Bah.

[yitrap]

DW writing a bunch of grammer points. Coming up.