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[yeshivabucher]

iPhone still erroring out.

try incognito

[WonderingYid]

Now a trilogy...

https://www.dansdeals.com/more/news/news-roundup/news-roundup-looking-back-month-war-israel/

On iPhone it loads then shows a error.

But Hamas was prepared and easily destroyed all that technology, leaving the country blind

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Grammer can probably be better.

[Dan]

iPhone still erroring out.

On iPhone it loads then shows a error.

Any better now?

[Yef]

Hamas also used drones to spy on Israel from as close as 150 feet in the sky, and they hoped to even reach the West Bank during the attacks.

Not sure what this is saying

[Dan]

Draft post, please proofread/offer suggestions:
https://www.dansdeals.com/more/news/airline-news/outrageous-american-airlines-ejects-17-year-old-orthodox-jew-flight-due-actions-unrelated-orthodox-jewish-passenger/

[Dan]

Draft post, please proofread/offer suggestions:
https://www.dansdeals.com/more/news/airline-news/outrageous-american-airlines-ejects-17-year-old-orthodox-jew-flight-due-actions-unrelated-orthodox-jewish-passenger/

Sharing soon if anyone has any quick edits
Where are my copy-editors @mevinyavin @Yehuda57 @lcm @biobook @etech0 @Joeymc @YitzyS @TimT @Joel @Euclid

[cholent]

Draft post, please proofread/offer suggestions:
https://www.dansdeals.com/more/news/airline-news/outrageous-american-airlines-ejects-17-year-old-orthodox-jew-flight-due-actions-unrelated-orthodox-jewish-passenger/

Insane!

[Yehudaa]

Sharing soon if anyone has any quick edits
Where are my copy-editors @mevinyavin @Yehuda57 @lcm @biobook @etech0 @Joeymc @YitzyS @TimT @Joel @Euclid

one typo here

[Dan]

one typo here

Is it?

[Yehuda57]

Sharing soon if anyone has any quick edits
Where are my copy-editors @mevinyavin @Yehuda57 @lcm @biobook @etech0 @Joeymc @YitzyS @TimT @Joel @Euclid

I would explain briefly what a kosher phone is, "kosher flip phones (non-smart phones with only phone and texting capabilities, common among many yeshivah students)"

IMHO - "I found their testimonies to be credible and compelling."

I was also thinking about the left philange reading the story :-)

[aygart]

"He helped a thankful passenger put their bag in the overhead" or is it "thanked a helpful passenger"

[Yehuda57]

Is it?

Yes. Protocol

[Yehudaa]

Is it?

I thought it was, and this page seems to say the same. Word also says so.

[imayid2]

The gate agent addressed both of them and said, you know what you did.

Maybe put quotations on “you know what you did”

[baron]

Is it?

protocAAL

[Yehuda57]

Cleveland due to being visibly Jewish

[Dan]

"He helped a thankful passenger put their bag in the overhead" or is it "thanked a helpful passenger"

The former. Is the wording confusing?

[Euclid]

The former. Is the wording confusing?

Not really, but you can add: "he stopped to help a thankful passenger"

[AJK]

"religious elemantary school"

typo

also take out the friends vid

it takes away from your serious point and cheapens it

[AJK]

"It should have been obvious that despite their similar garb, there was zero interaction between Reuvi and Yehudah. Yehudah boarded early while Reuvi boarded just before boarding was ending. They were seated 13 rows apart and that their tickets had no connection to one another. They lived in different cities and were strangers to one another. There should have been no reason to confuse the 2 or lump them together. And yet, the pilot on flight 4447 did exactly that in tossing them off the flight, seemingly because they both looked visibly Jewish."

This is a strong point, and for that reason the below is unnecessary and should be removed:

"Reuvi lives in an older Orthodox Jewish neighborhood in the city of Cleveland Heights, while Yehudah lives in a newer Orthodox Jewish neighborhood in the city of University Heights, and their paths haven’t previously crossed."

It doesn't add anything and dilutes your point.